https://youtu.be/CD9ZPnBc7LI
From my previous elevator pitch, the key advice was to just be careful with the frame of my footage since my head got cut off. I was told I gave strong points and overall had a strong elevator pitch. This time around, I recorded my pitch on my phone to fix the frame issue, and I tried to change my pitch to be a little more attention-grabbing in comparison to the last one.
Hey Gianna,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really great job captivating your audience. Your inflection and enthusiasm showed that you are passionate about what you are selling. The only thing I would say is I think perhaps your hook was a little long causing you to only talk about your product for the last 20 seconds. If you would shorten the scenario at the beginning you could insert more info about your product. Great job overall though!